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red and black sugar skull by TaitGallery red and black sugar skull by TaitGallery
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The color pallet is awesome! I would make the eye sockets a lil more rounded on the corners. The Jaw bone itself I would make narrower {to give it more of a feminine look} (So that it is lined up with the outer edge of the eye sockets on either side) and gets narrower as it goes down. The swirl pattern above the eyes is neat idea, however they aren't even. I would suggest using a ruler to avoid that issue in the future, or make the pattern on either side of the skull different so symmetry isn't a problem (I typically do anything that i plan to make symmetrical in pencil w/ a ruler first before tracing... by using the ruler to draw identical rectangles on either side of the face THEN sketch the {swirls in this case} using the rectangles as boundaries to help keep them identical). The lip shape is good I would just make them smaller (queen of hearts style) or a tad wider {just a different design style idea}. The round shape above jaw is really well done and adds to the character of the piece (again slightly not symmetrical but not as noticeable as the swirls). The nose should be a little shorter (= to the height of the eye sockets). Perhaps a background dark blue (Navy?) would help add some pop to the color. Overall, I love this piece! Awesome Job!!
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Submitted on
September 10, 2017
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samsung
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SM-A310F
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1/125 second
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F/1.9
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Sep 11, 2017 11:44:14 AM +01:00
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